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Vore story part 2

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Vore story PART 2
"Now let's see here does either of you boys know what vore is?" the Naga asked them while they were in her stomach still. "NO AND LET US OUT OF HERE" they both yelled as they hit the walls of her stomach causing another burp. "Vore is where someone like me eats people like you. Pretty much mostly predators and women can do this that's why we have the large bellies. There are many types of vore Soft, as I just showed you. Anal where you go in through the opposite way, Unbirthing where you'd become my child or just fat, Hair vore where you get eaten by hair, and many more" she said as he patted her belly "COME ON WE DON'T WANT TO BE DIGESTED" Blake yelled beating on the inside of her stomach. "Don't worries you'll reform all men do here but outside not so often" she said with a smirk and they started to digest. They woke up later in the nurse's office. "What Happened? Wait first of all why do we not have clothes on?" Robert asked as he and Blake were tossed new clothes. "Your physical is done you might want to head to your dorm, we have a shorting of girl dorms so you'll be sharing a room with a few girls and another guy" The nurse said with a smirk "Come back anytime" she said as she rubbed her belly which had another student in it already. They both got out of there as fast as possible "Great now we are targeted by girls everywhere" they said as they walked past a board that had their picture and slips below it "SHIT" Robert yelled as it was information about how they tasted and every other thing about them even what dorm their in "Great they will be going for us we're nine's after all once they get the 10's we're next and they even know where we sleep" Blake said noticing that 10 tasted the best. "I say I should have been a ten" Robert said "DUDE THEN YOU'D BE EATEN MORE wait you can't attend classes if your in a girls stomach. Wish I had that at our last school I would never of attended math" Blake said with a smile as they walked to their dorm "This place sucks" they both said as they opened the door and saw 3 beds "Wait why is there only three beds?" Robert asked as a girl walked up behind him "Because the men that are roomed with girls always sleep in their bellies till the next morning" the girl said as they turned around they saw it was a yellow fox girl (Aka. A Vixen) "Sorry I'm your roommate I'm Cathy and you are" "I'm Blake and this is Robert" Blake said with a smile. "The others will be here shortly In the meantime let's get to know each other" she said as she walked over and sat on a bed and motioned for them to do the same. "Well I'm Cathy I'm 20 years old, love to go partying and of course voring" she said with a smile on her face "I'm Robert I love sword fighting and martial arts" Robert said as he sat down "And I'm Blake I love music and drawing" Blake said with a smile

(more to come)
this is the second part to my story i don't know how many parts there will be but i guess only time will tell
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FiXXXerman's avatar
:hmm:...to be honest, this part was a little bit of a let-down. I think you should work on the dialogue a bit, it was pretty choppy and kind of hard to follow. Also, it would probably help if you didn't make so much of the story be dialogue, it makes the story feel less like an actual story and more like a script. But don't take it too hard, I still found this interesting! I just think that there's room for improvement, that's all. ;)